Today, for his World of Poetry assignment, Captain Science wrote this currently untitled sonnet:
The ground is falling, building crashing down
And houses fly like they have never flown.
A fire rages all throughout the town.
The city burned and everything we own.
The tower crashes, breaking the old clock
And waves of force are bringing down the house.
A sack of flour bursts upon a rock
And sleeping people afterwards are roused.
The blast so loud you hear it far away
And junk starts to pollute the city pond.
Debris is falling, blazes rage today
And force is snapping mighty metal bonds,
But finally the trembling terror ends
So everyone can fix the breaks and bends.
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[...] Read the section on sonnets in World of Poetry and written a beautiful sonnet. [...]
Wow. Tell him wow.
Very dramatic! He has crafted some very evocative imagery there. Nice work, Capt Science!
That was really good stuff. He makes me proud.
You have one very smart kid there